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day 1 pt1

Chapter one 
Day one 

Jake pike was 30 years old and a simple man who loved his wife and worked as a sales man for an electrical company , he alway dreamed of having his  honeymoon in the Bahamas so when he asked his wife to marry him she already knew where the honeymoon would be .  
Alice pike was 28 loved life and her husband , she worked at the local primary school where she was a secretary she loved her job 
it has been 17 hours since there plane crashed in the ocean and they have been taken by the tides to the shore of an desert island they had been at sea for a few hours an extremely tired as the waves wash them further up the shore 
Jake is the first to sit up and look at there surrounding he looks left then right and as he is looking he shouts out
” al , al , where are you, baby are you ok ” just up the shore he can see some movement ” al is that you ” he try’s to stand but he is so exhausted that his legs keep buckling ” al I’m coming , just stay still I’m coming ” he doesn’t give up he keeps trying till he gets to his feet as he takes his first few steps it was like a toddler stumbling . As he gets more confident he starts to run ” baby can you hear me ” . 
he gets closer and can hear her voice ” jake is that you , baby I can’t see you,  I can’t move ” hearing this jake is now running as fast as he can as he reaches the pile of suit cases he starts throwing off her ” baby , baby ” as he lift up the last suitcase he can see her ” baby are you ok ” al reply ” yeah what happened ”  jake takes al’s hand and places a kiss on her forehead ” I don’t know , the fasten seatbelt sign went on and then the plane shock and all I can remember is a bag came out the overhead and hit me and then I woke up in the ocean ” .
Al looks at the cut on his head and as she sits up al looks round ” where are we ” jake looks ” I don’t know I have-not seen anyone  from the plane do you think ” jake looks down at his feet ” that we are the only survivors” . The couple look up and down the shore but all they can see are washed up suitcases that are moving with every wave as each wave crashes on the white sandy beach . 
As the couple rest they both say ” we should go through the washed up luggage to see what we can find ” so as jake gets up he notices a cut on al’s leg “babe do you know you have a cut on your leg , do you know how that happened ” as she looks at her leg She shrugs her shoulder ” no maybe it was from the suitcases as I washed up ” so jake put out his hand helping al up to her feet , she was a bit more sturdy when she got up as she had rested longer “are you ok to walk ” jake said . Al took her first step on the island her foot sank into the soft white sand that starting to glisten as the sun came over the horizon ” wow look at that sun rise it’s beautiful ” the sun got higher in the sky and the couple looked at the shoreline . There was palm trees for as far as they could see ” ok well let’s see what we can find in all this ” so they started to collect as many suitcases as they could .
While they did this al looked out over the sea and saw something in the about 20 meters out ” what is that ” she said jake looked out to sea ” I don’t know ” so he stops what he is doing and walks out to the edge of the crystal clear waters and takes a long hard look ” I think it’s someone ” jake jumps in to the sea and swims out as he get closer he shouts out ” are you ok ” there is no reply , he reaches out to it ” it’s a person ” he grabs a hold just user the persons arms “it’s ok I got you ” as he is swimming back al starts to swim out to jake , the couple drag the person up onto the shore “are they alive ” jake roll him onto his back “its a man ” they check to see if he is breathing but nothing and his lips are blue ” I think he is dead ” as they stand back and look at the body al says ” we should bury him ” Jake nods ” yes wonder who he was and we should check to see if he has any Thing to show who he is so when we get rescued we have an idea who he is “


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